tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2443425297050023102.post7636259636537172344..comments2012-10-23T09:44:09.203-07:00Comments on Let's Talk Grammar: Taking a crack at brush strokes!KaraKristinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10195490776958992540noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2443425297050023102.post-48433491477735918502012-10-08T16:01:36.448-07:002012-10-08T16:01:36.448-07:00yes, a very nice read indeed, Kara. Just need to ...yes, a very nice read indeed, Kara. Just need to work more on absolutes; the other brush strokes work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00257940218680612340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2443425297050023102.post-91509844117118274192012-10-08T10:58:26.671-07:002012-10-08T10:58:26.671-07:00You did a very good job at adding in the weeks pat...You did a very good job at adding in the weeks patterns without the section becoming choppy to read. A lot of these blogs can be hard to read because people are trying to force in the patterns that they otherwise wouldn't have written. This makes the selection hard to flow and very choppy to read at times but you have worked in these patterns very well. If you hadn't colored the sentences I would have been able to read through the whole piece very smoothly. Great job. taylor_armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14594184837821647859noreply@blogger.com